All Comments on 'An Impromptu Party'

This author made a big goof. Can't use the proper format for stating time, the correct style is "10:58" not a number as done of "10.58" best learn the proper method.

@ Anon: Time format? Really? If that's all you can come up with, don't bother.

It was a little immature for my tastes, but still a good story overall. I enjoyed it, formatting and all.