All Comments on 'An Inquisitive Babysitter: The Discovery'

A wonderful tale of discovery and seduction. Beautifully builds to a magnificent conclusion. Very erotic and excellently written. Thank you

I enjoyed the tension-building as Miranda confronted Rose about snooping.

That set the scene for Miranda to seduce Rose, actually an entrapment, that added to the story. My only disappointment was that Rose didn't reciprocate.

...to be worthy of praise. Instead of thanking whoever pretended to know how to edit your writing, you should ask for an apology!

with making this submission easier to read. The grammatical mistakes made it rather difficult to get through and understand.

I like how you focased on the passion. Great writing!

Another lovely story. I loved the long seduction, the cat and mouse, the fact that it was not planned but comes out of passion.

I loved the detailed description of the lingerie. I love the sensual feel of fine lingerie on my own skin and how it looks and feels on another woman.

Thank you for this detailed, well written seduction

I was seduced by this story, just as Rose was seduced by Miranda . . . slowly, sensually. I loved the exquisite detail of both the lingerie and the emotions of the characters. Smallncute always surprises, never disappoints.

That was brilliant, one of the most seductive stories I have read for a long time.It was so sensual and utterly sexy, really a big turn on.

Gorgeous, delightful, delicious! I could almost feel the kiss of the fabric against my own skin. Thankyou for luring me into your story and letting me while away in wicked self indulgence. xxx

I found myself slipping from one character to the others feelings of sensuality. As a woman who had no plans of deception or seduction and a surprised young girls emotions of her first taste of a womans tender touch. The detail of the lingerie and the genuinly surprised emotions of each character were so realisitic and erotic.

You've done it again Miranda - a sensual tale full of detailed realism and building tension that really drew me in, leaving me with more than a tingle by the end! Keep up the good work hun xxx

such a slow, sensual and almost unintended seduction. Thank you.

I read a story similar to this, but they caught the babysitter by setting up a video recorder while they were out, and then did a replay for the babysitter when they got home., they also knew the babysitter had watched some of the erotic recordings the couple had made of themselves, and used them to seduce and blackmale the sitter into joining the couple. excellent.

Oh my! So beautiful such a sensually written story! So wet!

Great job! i was convinced this happened to you and was so wanting to see a picture of Rose!

Beautiful story

Thanks