All Comments on 'An Officer and An Italian Ch. 04'

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PrincessErinPrincessErinover 15 years ago
Loved it

Had to go back to read the last chapter since it's been a while. A wonderful sweet romantic ending. I loved it.

HonourHonourover 15 years ago
Lovely

to read such a gentle love story. Looking forward to more tales.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 15 years ago
Is that the end???

We don't get to see Rachel slide into love or run straight into love or fight it all the way? I've really enjoyed this story but if this is the ending it feels incomplete.

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years ago
awwe

a lovely conclusion!

Primrose_HollowPrimrose_Hollowover 15 years ago
Hmm

I loved this short series, but the ending seems some what sudden or (as previously mentioned) incomplete. Great work though! Keep it up! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great

I really loved this little series! I of course would love to read even more about Rachel and Sergio and what happens next but it is lovely as it stands too! Thanks for a great read!

AlydenAlydenover 14 years ago
is this the last one?

Is this the last part? I hope not! LOL. I like it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great!

A really nice and sweet story. Will you be writing one on Nicola?

pagemasterpagemasterover 13 years ago
Really sweet story

Enchanting, really. I sat here reading the ending with a smile on my face. I really enjoyed this.

Thank you.

labellnoirelabellnoireabout 12 years ago
Well....

I have read all four parts and I loved it all!!! Thanks for writing a story that was more true life then just a fantasy... It has me wishing that I was Rachel or even her nanny ..

blackazian13blackazian13over 11 years ago
Fun

Loved this story. It was quality fun stuff. Hopefully there will be a part 2? :]

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very nice...

Thank you.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticabout 7 years ago
Perfect chapter!

This chapter is practically in perfection, for me it has been the best of the series.

Not only has Rachel brought her father to reason, she has also discovered that she was doing the same to Sergio. Great truths have been described in this chapter, both in the sense of stubbornness and over-control as in the bitterness of the past and the negation of love.

Fortunately, they have realized in time, both Marshall and Rachel.

5 * for you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
awesome

wonderfully written story ... and love your sense of humor

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