by dragontatto
This chapter is practically in perfection, for me it has been the best of the series.
Not only has Rachel brought her father to reason, she has also discovered that she was doing the same to Sergio. Great truths have been described in this chapter, both in the sense of stubbornness and over-control as in the bitterness of the past and the negation of love.
Fortunately, they have realized in time, both Marshall and Rachel.
5 * for you.
Loved this story. It was quality fun stuff. Hopefully there will be a part 2? :]
I have read all four parts and I loved it all!!! Thanks for writing a story that was more true life then just a fantasy... It has me wishing that I was Rachel or even her nanny ..
Enchanting, really. I sat here reading the ending with a smile on my face. I really enjoyed this.
Thank you.
I really loved this little series! I of course would love to read even more about Rachel and Sergio and what happens next but it is lovely as it stands too! Thanks for a great read!
I loved this short series, but the ending seems some what sudden or (as previously mentioned) incomplete. Great work though! Keep it up! <3
We don't get to see Rachel slide into love or run straight into love or fight it all the way? I've really enjoyed this story but if this is the ending it feels incomplete.
Had to go back to read the last chapter since it's been a while. A wonderful sweet romantic ending. I loved it.