All Comments on 'An Unexpected Relationship Ch. 02'

Hope you get an editor soon.

You really, really need an editor or maybe you should stop writing.

Love your stories keep it up!

There's definitely potential here, but it is sometimes hard to read with the little grammatical things. I don't really like the format of things [like explaining things in brackets.] A good story should let those things unravel themselves and not be straight up about it. That being said, keep writing, just get an editor.