All Comments on 'An Unexpected Threesome'

by GGGrayson

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
A good start

I thought the friend was going to be a guy, but the conventional one man- two women story has its charms. Especially when the wife is an instigator and enabler.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice story

Very classing and nothing out of the ordinary. But it had a good flow to it, nice descriptions and actions, so all in all an enjoyable read. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

good story

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteabout 14 years ago
Decent writing...

....nice little whitebread fantasy. You ought to see what happens when the wife's High School friend comes!

GGGraysonGGGraysonabout 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for the feedback on my (first) story. Hopefully many more to follow!

SpreadHerCheeksAndFeastSpreadHerCheeksAndFeastover 10 years ago
Great story!

I really enjoyed it. I wish you would write more. I would have had her take the casserole out of the oven and get back in the living room. Then I would commense to eating both of their assholes out thoroughly.

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