All Comments on 'Anal in the Shower'

Got me stroking! Could be a bit longer.

You need to use soap for best and slickest results.

For best results when telling a story, avoid doing so in second-person. I mean, he wasn't fucking me.

Great little story, to the point but still with nice descriptions. Got me going!

Nice and sweet and intense! And I like the use of the second person voice; it adds to the intimacy of the piece, as if nothing exists in the universe except the speaker and the listener.