All Comments on '...and Clara Dances'

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 10 years ago
Nicely done, Clara

Thank you for this fascinating little story and for writing it so well. That 'goes double' as it seems to be your first story; I hope you have lots more to bring us, Welcome, new author and please have four stars for a good piece of work.

SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkabout 10 years ago
Inventive

It is hard to believe this is your first submission, so very well thought out and delivered. Delicious being just as blindfolded and in the dark as the dancing Clara. I hope to see more from you, that this first taste of erotica for you leaves you hungry for more. Thanks

visioneervisioneerover 9 years ago

A very unusual and admirable erotic story. The sense of “dancing” with abandon, both physically and emotionally, is nicely conveyed.

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