All Comments on 'And Then She Was Gone'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Author fails Anatomy 101

"As her pussy relaxed and accepted its new invader, Bill was able to push in far enough to find her maidenhead. When the head of his cock bumped into it..."

The hymen i.e., the maidenhead, is located at the ENTRANCE of the vagina - not some distance inside it. This should not be a secret

Otherwise, this was a pretty good story. It is unfortunate that the author had to follow tradition slavishly when describing the actual act of defloration

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Well Done!

This was a great story; well-written and sophisticated. The characters are believable and likeable, and the humor present throughout the story serves to make it both realistic and fun to read. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Romantic

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
well done aprguy

well written

wish there was some anal though

lolax2lolax2over 6 years ago
THIS WAS PERFECT!

I wish there was a Bill on my neighborhood :c

I loved it!

It was well written, well narrated, credible, loaded with lust and charm

One of the best i´ve read, for sure

Please keep delighting us with your stories

And if is possible, Older man/Young Girl themed

Gracias por compartir esta historia :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
My favorite story in whole Literotica!

I keep coming back to this story and It never fails to bring me the most intense orgasms!

The writing Is fenomenal and the erotic atmosphere that you create Is simply perfect

One master piece that's for sure

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
MANY MOONS AGO.

I was 23 , she, Mary was 17.5 a big tall curvy blonde from East Africa with a lovely sharp seth efrican accent ... being schooled at a girls school nearby, we had fun in my sports car on the north coast of Ulster one summer saturday , and she pleaded with me to take her cherry..being a gentleman i declined and we talked about our feelings for an hour or more..Now in my 60's I wonder if I was in the same place again back them would I or not...lol so where are you now Miss Watson??...will

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Part 2!!!!

OMG please continue this one! 😍🔥

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

2022 and still loving this delicious story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

If only this happened more often with the same mind set of sensible people. l believe there would be fewer marriage break ups by wives, trying to find if they missed out on something better. Would have been better with a widower so no cheating on a wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL!!

LenardSpencerLenardSpencerabout 1 year ago

Nice story. BUT... for a man who was so detail orientated, so pedantic on the little details, it is unthinkable that as he was "deflowering" a virgin, that no mention was made of wearing a condom nor birth control details. Unless somehow I missed it.

I mean, if she got pregnant it would definitely screw up everything.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It would have been more hot if he had discussed it with his wife and she was okay with it. No matter how he justified it to himself, he is now a cheater.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Why did the guy she chose have to be married? And, allegedly, happily so?

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And for him to agree to fuck her pretty much negated the premise that he was a “moral, nice guy”. Uh..he just proved otherwise 😎

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But well written.

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4 ****

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I wish he took my virginity to, such a sexy stud

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Can I be next in Mr. Mitchell´s bed?

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I have a few stories that have been bouncing around in my head for a while. I've never written anything really - this is a fun outlet for my ideas. Thanks for reading! Update February 2023: My follow-up to And Then She Was Gone has been submitted - expect to see it on the ...