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by Rockingit13
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Anonymousabout 11 years agoGood try!
Your story reads like a play by play, and the premise is good. Rewrite it and using dialogue, feelings, let us know who the characters are. Keep writing!
Anonymousover 2 years agounfinished
This story, while well-written, is too short, and it have unfortunately been left unfinished.
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