by LuciousBi-Writes4U
....fantasy of many married. Male and Female
This story needed a little more romance, to include a true gift giving that would have resulted in a 9-month stretch of a growing belly, and at least 18 years of baby-sitting and all the activities that go with childhood, adolescence, and young adulthood.
Writer should have added a 100 or so more words so that everyone could understan who was doing what and to whom and the story would have been much better
"Now it's my turn to get to the tootsie roll center…"
Your charming tale prevail, I enjoyed this for the romance that you protrait in a tantalizing tale. <grin> nice write
Just the right amount of romance instead of a straight fuck fest. Very well done!!