All Comments on 'Angel's Birthday Ch. 1'

Very good detail and desciption of her feelings.

I know that you intend to continue it but would like you to have gone a little further with this story. I think it would have set up the continuation better. Good story and I will wait for the next chapter.

Great story. You write very well and your descriptions are marvilous. When he started eating her cunt my hard prick went from hard to harder. I hope you write more. John P

Would have loved for that to be the experience between my daughter and I.

oh..i like it!! so sexy and taboo...i love it when my Daddy fucks me.