All Comments on 'Angel's Call Ch. 03'

Emulating the hero would be a goal of most of us! Having

a new grand-daughter I know how he feels about the baby.

Nicely written.

just one remark : the chapters are too short and don't follow soon enough. But then the story would be over too soon. G.Belgium

This is a good story! its building up! i like it! Cant wait for more! Thanks!!

Liked it,keep them comeing, thanks!

the story is coming along nicely. i like the pace and i hope you develop the relationship slowly; he is brokenhearted because his gf cheated on him, while she was probably abandoned by her bf. so they both need time to heal. good luck and i hope to read more from you.

He really is a good man to be keeping his promise to the baby. I'm interested to see what happens now that she's awake. Thanks for writing.

very nice...angel ıs so good story...