All Comments on 'Angel's Call Ch. 14-15'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Love it!

I like it! but i think they should just fall in love already hehe! Great story! Cant wait for more! Thanks!!

Tha_DonTha_Donalmost 16 years ago
Like an addict

please please tell me that your not going to prolong this torture any longer.

librarian_jimlibrarian_jimalmost 16 years ago
You're slipping

Most of this has been very good--I'm still eagerly awaiting new

installments after 15 chapters, after all--but part of this last one reads more like an incompletely developed plot synopsis than a story narrative. You say each couple goes on several dates, but

we get no details or timeline, and you make it sound like Chris is returning from his first and only date with Lisa when he has the accident. Meanwhile James has apparently already moved on.

BigFtHunterBigFtHunteralmost 16 years ago
Not quite there.

Didn't like it as much as the others. Sorry but please keep writing.

bruce22bruce22almost 16 years ago
Consensus has it

That one was a bit rushed! Also why does Anna tell Chris

that she loves him when he is in a coma and then not follow up on it. You would think that things would have crystallized

in her head.

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