All Comments on 'Anger Management'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
When and where

In the shop during a family event. ;)

daddygoesdeepdaddygoesdeepalmost 14 years ago
Nice Start

You gave that boy a pretty damn good fucking. More to cum I hope.

hopkinscmhopkinscmalmost 14 years ago
okay but...

I think this would have been better in loving wives section. As the man wasn't her cousin but her husband's cousin it is not incest. And there really isn't any thing taboo about adultery.

WilliamTellsOvertureWilliamTellsOverturealmost 14 years ago
Excellent, for a short story - and right to the punch.

But I have to concur with hopkinson's comment regarding his observations. Additionally, your writing is good, and most of all, your editing is immaculate. I hope to read more of your submissions, and if "incest" is your desired category; how about dreaming up some mother/son stories? These seem to be the most popular in that genre, and judging by your posted story, you ought to have no problem inventing any premise to get a good story going!

WilliamTellsOvertureWilliamTellsOverturealmost 14 years ago
Making amends...

I apologize to all, especially "hopkinscm" for mispelling that name while writing my comment. The error ocurred when I used his/her observation as a reference, to save duplicating in writ what had already been pointed out. Humbly - WilliamTellsOverture

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
hard

Your storyhas me hard as a rock. Would have loved to have seen you grinding on him. Im sure he enjoyed you. Would give anything to have been in his place. God how i would love to taste ur sweet pussy again and bite and pull on those beautiful nipples of yours. Lets go for a ride. Soon. Wear something light, maybe a sundress or something like that. No bra or panty's. I will drive you around with your legs casually spread and the top of the dress undone, just enough for passers by to get just a little glimpse. Pick a guy and i'll have him come close by your window. I lower the window for you so he can play with your beautiful body. All the time im getting harder and harder he is too. You see the bulge in his pants and you pull his cock out to stroke him off till he comes all over your tits. I start rubbing his load all over your exposed body in public. Then you stroke me off. Make me cum with the intensity you used to. Take my load in your mouth then put it in your hand and rub it all over your pussy, hoping that maybe we can get another guy to come by for u

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
No incest here

just a cheating whore story

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