All Comments on 'Angie's Lifeguard Stand'

I really liked the story, but you need to edit more, the mistakes took away from the story a little.

Pretty good, but I get the feeling you're pretty young and inexperienced. There isn't a lot going on other than your erection. I want more.

I don't disagree about editing or details--however, I politely disagree with your assessment of my lack of experience. My response is that not everything on Lit. has to be about big buildups and developed storylines--sex isn't that way. Sometime it is. Sometimes its about a wonderful one-night stand that has little to do with emotions and everything to do with cunts and cocks.