All Comments on 'Ann: The Married Years Ch. 08'

Hi Mimaster,

I found this one much more interesting and in-line with the "Ann concept". Only 4 pages and leaving us hanging for the second half + the afterburner that'll come between Neil and Ann, is a tough one to swallow...

The bit on Felicia and her firtst "sleeping around experience" did not do it for me... No way it happens like that. You just do not decide that on the flip of a coin... not many detail either, no emotional spin-off with Jason... It would have much more believable if that would happen to conceive a child and things would expand from there... More emotions could be added.

Anyway, please continue, this is still the only series I come back to...