by sexbabydoll26
very good start and very sensual.Keep this going and keep it at the pace you are doing ,leading up too stuff slowly and very descriptive.
Great start, don't stop now! I'm really looking forward to reading about the further adventures of Anna in the city
I love it by I'm too damn weak to fight it so.....I'm gonna have to take matters into my own hands .
Loved the start....was kinda disappointed (in a good way) that it abruptly ended....left me dying to read more and find out exactly what this horny niece and uncle will end up doing....definetely adding as a favorite to keep track of in the future....keep it up hun...I agree with the previous two comments...pace was perfect, don't rush it, enjoy it as all who will read it will surely do as well.
This is a great first effort. It could do with some editing, but what really counts -- the plot -- is well written and engaging. Keep it up.
I loved what I've read so far sbd26! I think you may have a real talent for this kind of writing. Great beginning! We all look forward to more.