All Comments on 'Anna, My Girlfriend Ch. 02'

Very cool story, don't let the negative people get you down. Any problems that you might have will work them selves out over time and with expirence. Keep it up!!

Hmm... Well, you could use a spell-checker. But other than that, your punctuation was pretty good. The story was a bit... normal. Though, that's what made it really sweet~ I liked it!