All Comments on 'Anne Working Overtime Ch. 13'

Tantala,

You are a very good writer. Very accomplished technical skills on a story that was refreshing to read. You have a definite writing "style" developed and reading the piece was enjoyable. Well done. Keep writing!

....on which side of the equation you fall on. Do you indentify with the submissive one or her clients? It would arouse me a bit more if some of her clients were a bit rougher with her and used some abusive language toward her.

I've said it before, but this is the best chapter yet! Nothing could have been better than that restaurant scene. Nothing. Or maybe the next chapter could...with a mother and daughter! My goodness, author ( I don't feel worthy to call you by your proper name---too familiar), I think you must know my deepest fantasies. Or at least what I find erotic. Me and millions of others, no doubt!!!! Bravo!!!