All Comments on 'Annie'

Great start please write more parts to this story. I enjoyed reading it.

Very likely to happen just as you wrote it . Well done .

Excellent Read! This many steps above the norm!

Thanks for wrting!

sexmate

i stopped after he found out beth was coming up also way to unrealistic if he didn't want his sister there he would have found a way to be out of town that weekend and why would his parents let her take beth to begin with keep it atleast sounding believable please

One of the best! Thanks for your story.

I can't wait to read the next part. Please continue with this story, it is wonderful.

I can't wait to read the next part to this story. This is a great start. Please continue with it, write the next chapter soon.

The best parts were with the brother/sister. The parts with Frank and Beth turned my stomach - which is not something that has happened before. Weird. Anyway, the brother/sister bit was WAY hot. Prolly not gonna read the sequel, if there is one.

I have a story on here...but no where NEAR as hot as yours omfg.

Just omfg

Naughty and nice!

Full of fun and humour and kind of believable. Well done.

Simply put....This is the first time that I have given 5 stars. *****

What happens next?

you should do the other part of what happens

to his roommate.

there is nothing erotic about calling the women "sluts".

Chloe, great details to really set the mood, and love your use of blunt descriptions. It all works to put the reader right in the middle of the action.

This is the first story from Chloe I've read, but it sure as hell won't be the last. I read this at work and boy did it get me hard and horny. (Ok - I was already horny before - that's why I came here during work;-)

It had just the right amount of buildup. The right amount of description. Amazing sex scenes. It even left us wondering - did they hear next door or not?

Can't wait to read more!

wow! that was such a hot and loving story and so well written. Congratulations! Is there going to be anymore? the next 3 nights?

Chloe - what a great story, so hot! You are super talented :)

You are a superlative writer. So hot, so immediate, so compelling.

Nice one!

Absolutely loved it! You made Annie seem so real and fuckable and yet a normal sister too.

Wow, so good! MORE!

I know, so long ago, yet, you handled the brother and sister so well, especially Annie.

Must know how much HEA they got...

I know, you wrote this 12 years ago, but, you have recent activity....