by DocCIS
I really like the story so far. It did not get out of hand so far. So take your time on the plot and don't hurry just because some of the readers get impatient (me too :-) ). I also think its a good idea that Bob should take a bit more control of the developpment of his "slut" (but his involvement may change, hehehe.) maybe first behind the scene unknown to Annie but for sure towering over his youth friend Rick. So until then good writing.
by far one of the most exciting stories i've read. esp the shopping part...please continue the series...humiliate the bitch...i think that bob's contribution in this whole matter should be that of a narrator...humiliate the bitch...make her beg to obey her two masters!