by DarianBlack
I have not one word to critique this story so far, I did, I loved it.
Great story!!! But now I'm hanging on to hear what happens next . .
Chapter 2 should be up within a week. I'll try to submit at least 2 chapters a month.
You guys rock! ^_^ Turning you on is the reason I'm in this business! ;)
I wholeheartedly agree with all of the other comments! A great first chapter and I'm happy that Chapter #2 is to follow so quickly. Keep up the good work.
So yeah. Chapter two should be up today, more'n likely. (As in you'll see it today :D)
Hopefully! If not, def tomorrow. Prolly today though. <.< Woot woot. Naughty stuff in it ^_^
to read chapter 2 tonight...
I never really read any of the incest genre, but discovered some great ones...
im into the romance stories, and this one looks good...
Some other good ones are Stolen Kisses, and Pure of Heart....
The series is great so far. Made me ache. You have a lot of talent and I look forward to reading your next chapter.
Please add more make it less boring. Where did they land? Do they make love? And is this a he said she said story?
However, a thorough proof reading or an editor is desperately needed.
Oh man this is so good! This such a gem I found. Hopefully they're the only survivors. Don't want any drama because of some third party.