All Comments on 'Annika's Islands Ch. 01'

by DarianBlack

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Oh man this is so good! This such a gem I found. Hopefully they're the only survivors. Don't want any drama because of some third party.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story.

However, a thorough proof reading or an editor is desperately needed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
boring

Please add more make it less boring. Where did they land? Do they make love? And is this a he said she said story?

SensualHavenSensualHavenabout 13 years ago

The series is great so far. Made me ache. You have a lot of talent and I look forward to reading your next chapter.

jpopo007jpopo007over 13 years ago
I am so excited...

to read chapter 2 tonight...

I never really read any of the incest genre, but discovered some great ones...

im into the romance stories, and this one looks good...

Some other good ones are Stolen Kisses, and Pure of Heart....

DarianBlackDarianBlackover 13 years agoAuthor
>.>

So yeah. Chapter two should be up today, more'n likely. (As in you'll see it today :D)

Hopefully! If not, def tomorrow. Prolly today though. <.< Woot woot. Naughty stuff in it ^_^

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Echoing the other comments!!

I wholeheartedly agree with all of the other comments! A great first chapter and I'm happy that Chapter #2 is to follow so quickly. Keep up the good work.

DarianBlackDarianBlackover 13 years agoAuthor
You won't be waiting long...

Chapter 2 should be up within a week. I'll try to submit at least 2 chapters a month.

You guys rock! ^_^ Turning you on is the reason I'm in this business! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice piece of writing

Great story!!! But now I'm hanging on to hear what happens next . .

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
more plz.

yes id like to see some more plz continue.

GypsyEyedGirlGypsyEyedGirlover 13 years ago
Absolutely LOVED it!

I have not one word to critique this story so far, I did, I loved it.

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