All Comments on 'Ann's Surprise From Santa Ch. 2'

Hot. Hot. Hot

I have only found your stories in the last day or two, I am glad I did.

Editing is a bit sus though, in places, excursions ? for exertions ?

I did find the context amusing though.

Great story, I was a bit distracted by the grammar, missing words and the numerous malapropisms, "wont" instead of "want" , "to" instead of "too" as well as "excursions" that devilboby has highlighted. They broke the flow of a really erotic story so it would benefit from editing. Having said that I like the story and can relate to it. The joy of open minded people meeting is always erotic and we have encountered that through swinging, it would be so fresh to encounter it in such a remote place where people were relaxed and not wary of each other. I guess this could happen as a poly relationship develops, so a well thought out idea.