All Comments on 'Another Day at the Office'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow!!! A new record!!!

Yep, turned off by the third word!!!

"I saw you first ..."

I find there is nothing more off-putting than the writer trying to pretend that the reader is/was part of the action!

The reader knows full well that they were not and therefore there is not the faintest semblance of believability in the entire story! Result? Total waste of time reading any further.

IrolIrolover 12 years ago
more please

the person above me is a moron. This story was GREAT! Loved it! 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
YUP HE IS ALWAYS AROUND

I am referring to anonymous, he doesn't write, he doesn't have the guts to leave a name he just writes bullshit on a continuous basis.

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