All Comments on 'Another Industrial Accident'

Loved your story. The accident scene was very graphic and well written. The action that followed between Mandy and Timmy was extremely hot!

Loved your story. The accident scene was very graphic and well written. The action that followed between Mandy and Timmy was extremely hot!

Taking a very plausible story line initially and then some expansion into a somewhat erotic slice of human nature, superbly done! Bravo!

I've read much of your work, very enjoyable and this was another very enjoyable read that you could expand to several more chapters should you feel the urge plus many of your positive supporters would enjoy.