by indigoblue
Romantic with a twist. How many friends are there like Trevor, who can set a friend up with a choice piece of womanhood. A woman whom he has had dreams of for years. Now she is asleep in his bed with his t-ee shirt on.
loved it, absolutely loved it. Just something about your style that makes the story so vivid, and perfect. Wonderful :)
thanks a lot for the beautiful piece
I absolutely loved this story! It was so sweet and hot and perfect. Great Job!
The premise of the story is very good, but the cheesy love making was a little of a turn off to me. God, I was cringing with the male character dialog; at times, it felt like it was the female. Very unrealistic; to go from casual friends, to dying lovers in the course of a little encounter filled with passion. Nonetheless a 4 stars for a good short of an effort.
While I admit to loving sex, I really enjoy a good story, too. Especially if I am reading about it. Unfortunately for me, I suppose, this one had a lot of one, but very little of the other. I can't really say I enjoyed this story. For me it was sort of like a martini without the gin. It just didn't feel like it was "all there".
A very good story, and extremely well written. I would enjoy seeing more of Alex and Anthony’s story. Thank you for this much of it.