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by Gordan

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beachbaby179beachbaby179over 10 years ago
Ah, yes...

... the one who got away. Please write chapter two. This is a very intriguing chapter 1. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

You chop and change points of view, one minute it's 'she', then 'I', pick a point of view and stick to it!

GordanGordanover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!!

Thanks for the input! I realized afterwards that I was mixing my tenses. Appreciate you guys reading the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
How is this romance?

Seems more like Loving Wives.

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