All Comments on 'Any Chance We Could Ch. 22'

100% on the writing skills and about 90% on content. I'm not discouraged though, even if the story doesn't move along very much it's still worth the time it takes to read the good story. I do know that it takes a lot of time to write good work, and the author still has to have time for other things in life, like working for a living, sex, eat food, and so on, so I say Thanks for the work that's in this fine post.......Rich

You did it again does another great chapter in this series. I like how you added Gwen and Kim as a couple this time. I can hardly wait to see what you do in the next chapter.

story ges better all the time. more please

A very pleasurable novella. Many interesting possible paths. Keep up the excellent work.

This is another one of your constantly evolving stories. I had gotten concerned when I hadn't seen another "Any Chance We Could (#XX)" scroll by lately. So I checked your profile and lo and behold, 2 new stories. Just done with this one, and it was yet again a delightful read. Just one question though. Why did you change the girls' names to Kitten and Minx?