All Comments on 'Appoloin Ch. 01-02'

Interesting beginning......

Of course it was the beguiling first paragraph that made a nice hook. The babe thinking about stripping within the safety of her solitude, the humidity, etc etc.

Of Course, youve set up a very slow ascent on a veery large mountain.....but continue....you must.

Keep it up......have to know what the winged giant is and what it did to the babe.....

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Deryck