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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
"Oh Charles," she sighed, "How skilfully your tongue flutters across my clitoris. I declare I am quite beside myself with passion. My peak is but moments away, and I entreat you to consummate our union by driving your magnificent weapon into your Mother's

What mom is saying to her 20 year old boy is, "just shove your big hard cock up your own mother's cunt and blow your hot young balls up the same warm wet hole you came out of." This is a really cute, original little vignette by a gifted writer of tales of hot motherfucking. Five stars, no question.

montywingermontywingerabout 10 years ago
Delightfull

I enjoyed this so much,,it gives us the story in all it's sexual delights without the need to resort to the more banal and crude expressions used so frequently.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Only the English

I say, Jolly good old chap... This piece was SO erotic. It seemed to be written by an English lad at night under his bed covers with a flashlight. One who probably read too many girl love stories

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 10 years ago
I'm afraid I can't respond how I want to here, for I lack the education to recall the right words to use.

Just know I found this very, very funny.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Victorian Style

Are you attempting to begin a companion volume to 'The Pearl'?

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42about 10 years ago
Salaciously charming and witty

Remarkably adroit Mr. rufriter. I enjoyed it immensely.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Well done

And very enjoyable to read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

You speak good English having been in this country such a long distance!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Ripping yarn!

Well done, old chap! Tom Jones (the original one) would be most proud!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wonderful

Absolutely well done!

LeFrog08LeFrog08about 10 years ago
Thouroughly charming.

It brought a smile and made me chuckle.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Garbage

What utter trash, a total waste of time

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great

Hahahaha. Nicely done bit of silliness

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
???????

What a load of crap !!!

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesabout 10 years ago
Since you don't seem to be into long stories, I'll keep my comment brief:

I didn't care for it. Rushed, pretentious, rushed, unintentionally sardonic, and rushed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Waiting patiently

for part two of "An Eye Opener For Tony"

mcbtwsmcbtwsabout 10 years ago
One Word Rating.

PISH!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
comment

It was 100% as advertised in the comments leading the story. Thank you!

shoeslayershoeslayerabout 9 years ago
Damn Nice

This is a Damn Nice story,of a young man

and his quite attractive mum and how he

fancies her and wants her and is so bold

as to tell her his desires. Why could I not

have that kind of luck ? WHY?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wonderful writing

This is very funny writing. Thanks. It provides good opportunity for foreigners to improve English. Wording is not common and funny to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

That was excruciating.

DocWordsDocWordsover 1 year ago

Great piece of work. Thanks.

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