All Comments on 'April Fools Dare'

I love that this is realistic and how the rivalry drove the girls to do the unexpected, while the guy was an almost "innocent" bystander.

Beautifully written and well paced too.

Wow - this certainly started my day by getting all wet! Thank you!

Thanks for sharing.

high quality writing that one expects from Mr. Appleby. Fully deserving the big 5. Must admit I felt envious. Most enjoyable. Thank you.

Pity about the last sentence though. Nasty

g_a, your funny got my motor racing. A great example of "Mad dogs and Englishmen Go out in the tropical sun"

Loved it! Thanks for sharing your story with us!

Very enjoyable. Very hot. Well done!. I gave it a 4. I'd have given it a 5, except I didn't like the deceit at the end. I get the April Fool's theme, but I thought it was covered well enough with the April Fool's dare - I liked that, that was cool. But I'd have been thrilled with a story that was complete with hot sex between 3 people without any consequences. Finishing it with the potential negative consequences was a drag. Too much of that in real life. I prefer my sexual fantasies not to have negative consequences. (I know no one cares what I think, just explaining my 4 rating.) That said, I'm still digging into your submissions and reading more. You are a great writer!

Hello. No worries about your comment - I can appreciate your feelings. Thanks for the feedback.

...same to everyone who has commented so far. It's appreciated.

APRIL FOOL!!!!!!!! great story my friend.Thanks for sharing

very interesting and very arousing. I liked Zoes attitude more than Cates. Your details in the story were very good could see the story in my mind. Would have enjoyed a little more detail of what Graham looked like but that is just me... lol Look forward to more of your work.. An I think if the girls would have been a bit nicer and not so much dares for the April Fools theme that Graham wouldn't have gotten his own on them.. I can understand why he went to that length..... Keep going on the writing..

Congrats GA, you found a way to make a MFF with two 20 year old chicks sound really hot! ;-) Loved it and gave it 5 stars.

Great character development for such a quick piece. Nice job with such a bugger of a topic... still thinking about what I ,ay submit. 5 Stars/

For geezer Graham,it was Valentines Day,Thanksgiving,and Christmas all rolled into one! ~ HOT! HOT! HOT!

ps: Here's hoping that the size of Cate's belly soon matches,then surpasses the size of those BIG tits!

Well that's a great tale of come upance. His favorite Zoe got what she needed and Cate got what she deserved and Graham got what he desired. Well written, sexy, hot, and a bit cute. Thanks again for writing, it's much appreciated 😜😁👍

Loved it, so good but so bad at the way you ended it

a real life story in a unreal life story! awsume! you get a ton of admiration from me....