by geronimo_appleby
a real life story in a unreal life story! awsume! you get a ton of admiration from me....
Well that's a great tale of come upance. His favorite Zoe got what she needed and Cate got what she deserved and Graham got what he desired. Well written, sexy, hot, and a bit cute. Thanks again for writing, it's much appreciated 😜😁👍
For geezer Graham,it was Valentines Day,Thanksgiving,and Christmas all rolled into one! ~ HOT! HOT! HOT!
ps: Here's hoping that the size of Cate's belly soon matches,then surpasses the size of those BIG tits!
Great character development for such a quick piece. Nice job with such a bugger of a topic... still thinking about what I ,ay submit. 5 Stars/
Congrats GA, you found a way to make a MFF with two 20 year old chicks sound really hot! ;-) Loved it and gave it 5 stars.
very interesting and very arousing. I liked Zoes attitude more than Cates. Your details in the story were very good could see the story in my mind. Would have enjoyed a little more detail of what Graham looked like but that is just me... lol Look forward to more of your work.. An I think if the girls would have been a bit nicer and not so much dares for the April Fools theme that Graham wouldn't have gotten his own on them.. I can understand why he went to that length..... Keep going on the writing..
APRIL FOOL!!!!!!!! great story my friend.Thanks for sharing
Hello. No worries about your comment - I can appreciate your feelings. Thanks for the feedback.
...same to everyone who has commented so far. It's appreciated.
Very enjoyable. Very hot. Well done!. I gave it a 4. I'd have given it a 5, except I didn't like the deceit at the end. I get the April Fool's theme, but I thought it was covered well enough with the April Fool's dare - I liked that, that was cool. But I'd have been thrilled with a story that was complete with hot sex between 3 people without any consequences. Finishing it with the potential negative consequences was a drag. Too much of that in real life. I prefer my sexual fantasies not to have negative consequences. (I know no one cares what I think, just explaining my 4 rating.) That said, I'm still digging into your submissions and reading more. You are a great writer!
g_a, your funny got my motor racing. A great example of "Mad dogs and Englishmen Go out in the tropical sun"
high quality writing that one expects from Mr. Appleby. Fully deserving the big 5. Must admit I felt envious. Most enjoyable. Thank you.
I love that this is realistic and how the rivalry drove the girls to do the unexpected, while the guy was an almost "innocent" bystander.
Beautifully written and well paced too.