All Comments on 'April in Texas Ch. 07'

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MacDukeMacDukeover 17 years ago
Point of Chapter?

This chapter only adds to the train of the story if you tie up Louie's dalliance in San An with his aversion to spontaneous sex. How is the character of Sheryl so indifferent to this possible cheating? And credibility is strained by the contretemps of Lamar with this very sophisticated business woman who is inexplicably blase' about spying and voyeur in a business setting. Video in bathroom and leering by boss and scots is harassment per se. Don't yet see how this video conference adds to story.

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