All Comments on 'April's Awakening'

i really enjoyed your story

purrss* mmmmm what a delicious story, please continue

birth control pills don't work like aspirin. they must be taken regularly for at least a month to be truly effective in reducing the risk of pregnancy. i appreciate your attention to detail, but you're misinformed on the subject of birth control. your character would be better off using a diaphragm as a last-minute anti-baby precaution. sorry to be so nitpicky - it just stood out as a flaw in an otherwise decent story.

What in the world made you think that she didn't take the pill every night? My goodness, I'm insulted that you would not only nitpick over something that not only has no bearing on the story, not only something that you blatantly misread in order to have something to blab about, but I'm insulted that you would dare lecture me and other readers as to the specifics of the pill, diaphrams, and birth control in general. Just enjoy the story and don't be a jerk.

Something I want to come back to, the next time Duane is in town. I'm sure April is more than ready and willing. I see potential in his control of her and she will enjoy every wonderful, erotic second of it. As will he...

i can't wait for another installment.

I love when an older man takes charge and seduces young slutty girls. Great story, from a female perspective.

Loved it. The way you descirbe what she is feeling... made me kinda want to experience it... lol

When will he call her next?

*Silent Writer*

Just one more comment about the birth control thing. Maybe the US readers are not all that familiar with the night before prevention that is not widlely available here but very available in Europe and elsewhere. Anyway, loved the story and I look forward to Duane getting back in town. Great job!!!