All Comments on 'Aprons For Gayle Ch. 16'

I love this story but get really frustrated with the whole Hamish dating.. don't like it one bit. It kinda makes me hate him and wish Gayle would just get a normal job..

Just beautiful writing again. Please keep going. Thanks.

I wonder how Hamish would feel if Gayle were to start dating?

You are doing a wonderful job of humanizing Hamish! I love "make me breakfast in bed" since you lost idead.

He's growing on me chapter by chapter!

As always a well written hot story, and Bessie never fails to make me laugh!

Thank you and 5 stars.

I like Hamish you put it all together so well just don't keep us waiting

SHYSUB: Bessie was my co-author's idea; I'm a cat person. But yes, she does add some humor. I'm liking her, too. PS---I'll read your fic this weekend! I'm working on chap 18....chap 17 is ready to post, but I won't post until next week because I'm still changing stuff here and there

INSPECTOR: Hi! Humanizing Hamish...yeah, men need to evolve, and he's coming along nicely, right? :-) I actually used the man cooking breakfast in another fic and it was pretty sexy, though I tuned down the sexiness w/Hamish a bit.

ANONYMOUSes: Thanks for your comments!!!

I've been rolling with the chapters! I've submitted Chap 17 just now, so that should be up on Thursday. And I'm halfway through Chap 18 now.

Now all I have to do is freaking finish Hiliad's! Ugghh.

Well, I've finally caught up, A2W! I love the slow, inexorable build between these two. Can't wait to see what comes next! Or who! I did like her dream about disciplining Hamish just a bit more than is probably allowed, but then I've been know to appreciate either side of a power exchange, so... Great, great work!

I love Outlander, been reading it since I was 14... How do you feel they treated the wedding?

"I've taught teenaged boys how to fly gliders, and they didn't crash." (sort of ruins the teasing when they go flying). Love the story.

Loved it, would love to see it continued will he propose to her or someone else. I'm on the "edge" of my seat