All Comments on 'Aquata Cove Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Merrick's point of view

I think there should be some kind of title or other warning so we know it's the same time but from Merrick's point of view.

When the first paragraphs were all the same, I though it was just a double posting and almost didn't read it. It's only because I noticed the word 'squid' when I was scrolling that I knew it was a different chapter.

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