All Comments on 'Aquata Cove Ch. 30'

But I'm not convinced with the Japanese speaking. I have no idea what is being said as there are no translations, either in brackets after the speech, or at the end of the chapter. Makes it very hard to get into the story as we don't know what the words mean so completely pointless it being there. Same with previous chapter too.

Would be appreciated beings how a large chunk ok the last two submissions I couldn't understand tho I was able to ascertain the general gist of it

Love this story overall tho!!

I had no idea what was happening with the japanese speak--as said by a comment. Translate please! :) it helps make it easier to understand what's happening.

That's a shame it won't allow you to edit the text of this and the previous chapter.

But at least you know for the next ones. I don't mind the Japanese, it adds more to the story, as long as I know what it actually means. Or maybe write it English but somehow say that they are speaking in Japanese. Sort of.

"but this website won't let me edit the story text,"

You can resubmit the entire chapter with your edits the same way you would add a chapter to your story. In the title add Edited at the end. In the comments box to the moderators just tell them you want to replace the edited chapter with the posted one. It takes about a week before they repost the edits but they do. I've had to do it myself for a couple chapters of my story.

BTW, I've thoroughly enjoyed this story. You are very inventive!

i re-read the story and enjoyed a chapter here or there that I must have missed the first time. It is a great story. Knowing what the next chapters bring...i think i will stop here and hope that it continues to get better. The one thing I hope we get some closure on is what happened to his sister. was she driven crazy by her sorrow? Did her mom find her intent or figure out she'd done something wrong? I look forward to the next chapter you post which will be in the 40's.

It DOES get better from here on out. As for his sister, she's doing ok - she misses her big brother very much, but as anyone does, life goes on. I can't reveal too much without spoiling anything.