All Comments on 'Are You Big?'

by XXOrpheus1

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Sid0604Sid0604about 10 years ago
Thank you

A great 1st story. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Moving on to Chapter 2, please.

Well, I didn't see that coming. I thought the lunch was over. Turned out dessert was next. Well done.

Hopefully chapter two will find them together again, after all there is more to explore, and he can get her motor running again.

Perhaps chapter three can involve her daughter, after all, sharing is what families do.

Thanks Don

KidCreoleKidCreoleabout 10 years ago
It is a good start, but I got a little lost

I like the premise. However, you say these lunches have been going on for a while and she was trying to set him up with her daughter. Whenever it appears that you went back in time, you talked about that "first Tuesday". It was unclear when you jumped back and forth, or why you did it. Otherwise a good first story. I gave you a 5, not going to mark you down for a little confusion. Just work on it. Good luck

swingerjoeswingerjoeabout 10 years ago
Nice debut

I like the premise and the setup, and I thought the sex scene was hot. I have no idea what that one anonymous commenter is talking about. This site seems to attract the angriest people.

Keep up the good work.

arsekoarsekoabout 10 years ago
King Cummer

Great twist on the friends having lunch dates and 'setting up for her daughter'.

Good work. Keep it going

chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
HOT!!!!!*****

That's a hot piece of writing. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
How many of us have fantasize about something like this ?

Sooooo fucking hot. Thank you for sharing. Encore

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
My Hotwife

Very well done and very steamy indeed. The hot scene described well. I enjoy reading about the tales of other horny mature women.My mature wife however would have given him the blowjob of his life swallowing every drop of his young cumload.She loves to go down on much younger very hung guys to completion. And having me watch is a huge turn on for her. Looking forward to parts 2 to ........

SybilleNordlandSybilleNordland7 months ago

Wonderfully wicked. Wonder if he will marry Ellens daughter... giggles.

Thanks for sharing.

Hugs and Kisses

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