All Comments on 'Are You Serious?'

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 15 years ago
Up to standard...

...and I loved the twist at the end. Thanks Jude

EspressoBolusEspressoBolusalmost 15 years ago
Nice work!

Hot story with a fun twist!

Chimney SweepChimney Sweepalmost 15 years ago
I enjoyed that.

Well done. She seduced him well and I enjoyed the escalation. If there is a sequel to this, it could be very interesting...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well!

That was a very cute story. I enjoyed it very much! Beautifully written too.Thank you!

miedsalmiedsalabout 14 years ago
Great ending

Good story, the ending was great. Now if he can just get both sisters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Clever premise.

But the 'unexpected' ending somehow took the edge off it.

And you need to proofread better. You wrote "g sting" instead of "g stRing".

J6480J6480over 1 year ago

Well conceived and a good read

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