by JudeWrites
But the 'unexpected' ending somehow took the edge off it.
And you need to proofread better. You wrote "g sting" instead of "g stRing".
Good story, the ending was great. Now if he can just get both sisters.
That was a very cute story. I enjoyed it very much! Beautifully written too.Thank you!
Well done. She seduced him well and I enjoyed the escalation. If there is a sequel to this, it could be very interesting...