All Comments on 'Are You Serious?'

by JudeWrites

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J6480J6480over 1 year ago

Well conceived and a good read

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Clever premise.

But the 'unexpected' ending somehow took the edge off it.

And you need to proofread better. You wrote "g sting" instead of "g stRing".

miedsalmiedsalabout 14 years ago
Great ending

Good story, the ending was great. Now if he can just get both sisters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Well!

That was a very cute story. I enjoyed it very much! Beautifully written too.Thank you!

Chimney SweepChimney Sweepalmost 15 years ago
I enjoyed that.

Well done. She seduced him well and I enjoyed the escalation. If there is a sequel to this, it could be very interesting...

EspressoBolusEspressoBolusalmost 15 years ago
Nice work!

Hot story with a fun twist!

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 15 years ago
Up to standard...

...and I loved the twist at the end. Thanks Jude

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