by LordOfHell
Mother/son is my favorite type of incest. I would have liked it more if you had stretched the sex scenes out a little longer and made them more explicit. This is not a criticism.
I didn't not like this story , I fucking love it, now how about getting her back with her store clerk lover and her get prego too.
I loved this story. I especially love the whole split personality you had going on with the mother witch definitely made things more interesting.
Your story line is excellent...
Your inability to proofread and correct the submissions earned a three rating...too much distraction trying to figure out the whole 'context' thing...confusing...
Truly wonderful ending. Finally, someone has the courage to communicate with the other. Almost an entire year wasted because no one wanted to discuss the issue. Unlike fiction, real life seldom meets honesty, openness and real, unconditional love. 5 star series.