All Comments on 'Ariadne's Dreams Ch. 04'

by LordOfHell

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EryickaEryickaover 12 years ago
lovely

I loved this. Great work!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I really liked your story...

Mother/son is my favorite type of incest. I would have liked it more if you had stretched the sex scenes out a little longer and made them more explicit. This is not a criticism.

EyelanderEyelanderover 10 years ago
Great!

Nice build up and side build up, great story!

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 10 years ago
oh my god

That whole series was awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
TOO HOTT

I didn't not like this story , I fucking love it, now how about getting her back with her store clerk lover and her get prego too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I loved this story. I especially love the whole split personality you had going on with the mother witch definitely made things more interesting.

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOG8 months ago

Your story line is excellent...

Your inability to proofread and correct the submissions earned a three rating...too much distraction trying to figure out the whole 'context' thing...confusing...

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a3 months ago

Truly wonderful ending. Finally, someone has the courage to communicate with the other. Almost an entire year wasted because no one wanted to discuss the issue. Unlike fiction, real life seldom meets honesty, openness and real, unconditional love. 5 star series.

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