All Comments on 'Around the World: Not Alone'

by orblover

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txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayover 18 years ago
Interesting...

and very different i must say. Well written and since it so different than the "usual" stuff here...i give it a 10plus. i hope you either continue this one into a series or at least more writing. you got a fan and i'm sure there will be more to come. respectfully a fan in Texas

orbloverorbloverover 18 years agoAuthor
My thanks!

I'm glad you like this. Actually, given that it's an Around the World event, yes, there will be many more - as soon as my mind thinks them up. In all honesty, the comments I've gotten so far have inspired me to begin the process for the next in the series - "Crossing the Equator" - full of fun in a long history of the Anglish Navy passed on to others. King Neptune will appear for the transformation of the Pollywags into Shellbacks. There will be judgement, preperation, paddling, and walking the plank.

Later stories will fully explain why I don't use the traditional punishment of lashes in the same way. 50 minus 1 was a horrible experience for everyone (except the odd sociopathic sadist). I prefer more creative punishments that are not permanent on the body. My goal is not to control but use control to help growth.

Again, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
ministrations :)

menstruations are monthly periods - not nearly as much fun as minitrations can be!

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