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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
awful...

written like a semi literate teenager-boring, predictable and not very sexy

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Artist girl

Ok so I am into Asian guy so this caught my attention. . . I think it was a bit unrealistic. . She was a virgin right? Therefore "Asian guy" would have seen a small amount of blood from the hyman and she would haven't felt good right away theres pain before pleasure and she would have been trembeling. . . So more detail would have been good. . I am going to post a story and if you like you can email me to discuss yours fnk868@aol.com

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