All Comments on 'Artistic License'

by Nehima

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triestetriesteover 12 years ago

I enjoyed the premise of this. Felt like the lead in--her meeting him and progressing to the invitation to her place--was a little fast for plausibility, but other than that, it was very sensual and I really liked the ending. :)

mishacatmishacatover 12 years ago
Gorgeous

... just gorgeous. Thank you.

pleasureseeker5pleasureseeker5over 12 years ago
Well done

Very sensual. I checked out your other story--you are a talented writer.

coffinbaitcoffinbaitabout 11 years ago
please tell me you will write more

Wow please continue I loved that it was so hot. I could picture it in real life!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

wow I got the hot's now, that was an awsome story

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