All Comments on 'As I Want You to Be'

It's always such a joy to wake up and have one of your stories to look forward to, and this is a good one, short, but good!

You have a wonderful way of expressing the chemistry your characters share, even in your shorter stories, that keeps me wanting more. It literally leaps off the screen. And no matter how cold and hard your protagonist attempts to be, you always manage to bring out the humanity in them.

So, as always, please consider giving us more of these two.

Great Job! Thank You for your Hard Work!

Doc

Hope there is more to come with these two!! Love your stories!!!!!

LoL...Sweet, short and to the point. No quibbling or hassling, simply two hotties going after what they want. Lj is such a cutie and brazen to boot. I hope Mia knows what she is letting herself in for.... all that pent-up hotness... Shoo!

** I LOVED IT! **

You have a knack for putting your reader inside the heads of your characters. And LJ is adorable.

An excellent mix of sweet & hot in this little story. I love your sense of humor. It always rounds out the edges perfectly and lends an authenticity to the characters and storyline.

Thanks for sharing your work! I always look forward to more.

Great short story and sensual in a special way! Thank you

Let me preface this by saying I sincerely have no lust for teenage girls...and yet I found this to be so hot, and as other have commented, very sweet. I appreciate that Mia had her own struggle with LJ's youth, that made it very believable.

Somehow you make all of your characters relatable, in most stories I put myself in one character or the other, whichever is most like me.. In this case I am as unlike LJ as anyone could be, and yet I felt inside her head (and skin) throughout the story.

Really nice, thank you for this while we wait for the new chapter of my GF.

As a short story, it's very good written. Go on :)

Very good, and very well-written (alike to every story you produce).

You have a fantastic ability for character-development, and I couldn't agree more with what Doc said; the development and progress is so real and natural that it leaps off the screen.

Some sort of follow-up to this story, or these characters would be great (LJ was fucking HOT), and very much appreciated!

Great work! :)

...everyone. I like LJ too and intend to add two sequels to this at some undefined point in the future, interspersed with other series.

HURRY!!!!!

I really enjoyed this story as it is, but it is great that you have decided to add to it. I can't wait!

Good Start! A real good start!! Please don't stop here!!!

Thank You..

Gay Paige.

You've done it again. There has got to be more... Please...

This is so cute.

Awesome writing- good flow, realistic, characters thoughts/actions are totally believable. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter now and checking out your other stories. :)

breathless and believable. I loved reading this. Thanks

Lovely little story you have here and very arousing thank you! Continuing on the hotness.

Quite enjoyable. Glad I started at the beginning. Ready to read next part.

Wonderfully done! Thank you!

Amazing Ending

Wow, you write shorts amazingly! I'm gonna read one of your longer ones, trusting that my heart can take the pounding! Wonderful!

Loved it! Great description of real lesbian sex. I get the feeling you have some real-life experience in that area. Keep up the writing!

OK. Cutest 5 I've given.

Agree with Okami, so cute.

Love the baby dyke

Simply excellent. Love the mix of experience and naivety. I wish I had Mia’s sang froid! 5 stars all the way.