All Comments on 'Ashley's Turn'

by JV in ME

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don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Good, but could have been better...

Excellent.....until you pulled out of her and shot your cum all over her naked back. That ruined this fantasy fuck story. She is your sister-in-law....she could have your baby, too...

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Pretty good, except for the stupid question marks!

Pretty good story. Better than the first one in many ways. But those blasted question marks all over the place are a real pain. Get a word processor that is compatible with whatever Literotica is using!

nineliveswastednineliveswastedover 17 years ago
awesome

I don't care what anyone else says. This story had everything I could ask for. Perfect.

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