All Comments on 'Assassin'

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Anitablake10Anitablake10about 16 years ago
FIRE!!!!!!!

The fire that would exist between them would be amazing what about children them being taught to be assassins as well.

so many things could happen please write more chapters quick please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
oh, please!

Learn apostrophe rules. Learn about homonyms. And for crying out loud, pick a verb tense (past or present, preferably past tense), and STICK WITH IT. How can you expect people to follow your writing efforts if you're going to fail to pay attention to basic rules?

-- KK in Texas

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
The story is nice. Ignore the previous meanie!

The story is fun! I love the assassin angle. I hope you write more!

Ignore that previous mean complainer! That type of person is a coward hiding behind their computer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Yum!

Very sensual!

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