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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 15 years agoThe story is fun! I love the assassin angle. I hope you write more!
Ignore that previous mean complainer! That type of person is a coward hiding behind their computer.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoLearn apostrophe rules. Learn about homonyms. And for crying out loud, pick a verb tense (past or present, preferably past tense), and STICK WITH IT. How can you expect people to follow your writing efforts if you're going to fail to pay attention to basic rules?
-- KK in Texas
Anitablake10about 16 years agoThe fire that would exist between them would be amazing what about children them being taught to be assassins as well.
so many things could happen please write more chapters quick please.
